Here is something that might help. I was playing around with the PET's vertical scan circuitry in the Spice simulator (still waiting to get my own PET) and found something interesting about it.
A good vertical scan relies on the voltage across the "Sawtooth capacitor" , C611 in the PET VDU, being a fairly linear ramp. So often, as it is in the PET VDU, the capacitor is charged by a current source.
There is an additional capacitor too which disables the current source when the sawtooth capacitor is being reset (discharged) C602, but these numbers might be schematic version specific. But in this particular vertical circuit, that feedback causes a very interesting effect when (and if) the sawtooth capacitor loses capacitance.
I have attached an image of what happens when the sawtooth capacitor drops in value from 10uF to around 1.5uF or below, it results in a very interesting effect of a twin amplitude scan, where there is an initial aborted scan and a secondary higher amplitude one. This result would pretty match what I see on the screen of your VDU, so this would be the first capacitor to check.